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Friday, 14 July 2017

Poetry Slam

5 comments:

  1. Kea ora, my name is Isla and I go to Kokatahi-Kowhitirangi School. I really like how you did a slide on to be yourself. One thing you could do next time is check over your writing again and check if you have any mistakes. Blog you later:)

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  2. Hello Te Airi, I'm Ruby. I really like your post because it is very inspirational. I like how you are inspiring everybody with those words. maybe next time make sure it makes a bit more sense.
    Blog you later! ;)

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  3. Hallo my name is Dominic. I really like your post. Cool flags, but you could move them dawn the page a bit more. I'll blog you later.

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  4. Hi there My name is Ehsan and I am at Waikowhai Primary school. I really liked how you added lots of detail. It made me think of winning a prize by adding lots of detail. Have you thought about not putting the Flags near your face. If you would like to see My learning My blog is http://wpsehsank.blogspot.com/

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  5. Kia Ora my name is Paradise and i'm from Room 24 at Owairaka District School. I really liked your blog post about standing up for your rights and thanks for the heads up. I have never done anything like this before. say hi to the kidz and anuty. Have you tried letting us see you come cheack out my blog http://odsparadiset.blogspot.com/ blog you later Paradise

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